I am running for my life a deadly storm is approaching at me! its the end I say Its the end the end! so I'm scared and I think I'm going to DIE! yes, but Im safe and in a cosey house full of shelfs and air condishaners and its so cool because its next to a waterfall its amazing I say no one is here! its a dream come true! so I found a bunch of aquitment and made my self a bed to sleep in. Ah so nice I say I yawn and go to sleep. by Miller. 🥀
Hi Harry here I like your story I like how at the end you say its a dream i did not know it was a dream. Do you always write a lot?
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Kia ora. I am Michael from St Mary’s School
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you used your imagination to your story
I learnt that you can use your surrounding to make a story
Maybe you could make your story lounger
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Michael
Kia ora. I am Jake from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you included a tornado
I learnt that good at making\writing storys
Maybe you could tell us if you died
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Jake
Kia ora Miller Aymen here from Room 23. I thought that Something was going to happen to you in that story but it was a great twist.
ReplyDeleteKia ora. I am Sophia from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you told a story from your dream.
I learnt how you can use your surroundings to tell the story.
Maybe you could tell more about the story and tell what happened next time?
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Sophia
Kia ora. I am Maddison from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you told your story which was from your dream.
I learnt that I learnt how you got away nice and fast just in time when the storm hit you.
Maybe you could visit my blog and maybe tell me more about ur adventure inside your dream?
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here Maddison P @ St Mary's - Gisborne
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Maddison
Kia ora. I am Jude .
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you told your story which was from your dream.
I learnt that I learnt how you got away nice and fast just in time when the storm hit you.
Maybe you could visit my blog and maybe tell me more about your adventure inside your dream?
Please visit my blog.
blog you later.
bye!!
Jude.