Ka pai Miller. Great haiku. I like how your text matches the colour of the lava. Maybe you could do a screencastify reading of your poem? Or an animation?
Kia ora Miller, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. Haiku can be tricky to write - you have done well to get the syllable count correct. Do you enjoy writing other forms of poetry? Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Ka pai Miller. Great haiku. I like how your text matches the colour of the lava. Maybe you could do a screencastify reading of your poem? Or an animation?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Miller, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. Haiku can be tricky to write - you have done well to get the syllable count correct. Do you enjoy writing other forms of poetry?
ReplyDeleteKia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)